I stumbled across an old book of poems I had written in high school and I thought I’d share one with you. It is rather macabre so you are forewarned. I’ve placed the background info for the poem at the bottom of this post so if you’re interested you know what to do. Remember, I own the copyright (especially if you think it’s good!). I encourage you to read this out loud. As with some free verse poems, pause after every line and read s-l-o-w-l-y (it adds effect). Let me know what you think and I’ll maybe post some more!
Walking at midnight,
I am
blindfolded.
Snowflakes strike
my face and soon melt.
I am
led
deeper into the woods.
I trip
on a rock
and then a root.
Farther
and farther
into the woods.
I stop.
Silence
deafening as a hundred trumpets.
Broken.
Two shots. One
piercing my lung,
the other, lodged
in my aorta.
I fall
into the snow.
Snowflakes strike
and soon melt into
crimson.
The background is we had to write a poem after reading a newspaper article. I found one about a man who was found dead in the mountains. He had been there during the winter and died of two gun shot wounds. At the time no one knew who he was. I thought it would be interesting to write about what happened when he died.



maryann Said:
on February 13, 2007 at 8:09 am
Hey, thats pretty good, sad – but good. Well, it’s obvious you didn’t get ANY of your talents from ME! Boy are you lucky!
! LUV YA
Dad Said:
on August 6, 2007 at 3:03 am
That was rather sad, but as Mary said,”…pretty good,…” How come you never told me you had written some poetry?